It was a hot and sleepy afternoon in the summer. I sat
on the sofa, in front of the television and watched a TV program
in the living room…Why was I in an environment, which was
filled with blood and skeletons? What an unusual world this
is!
Suddenly, from a distance robots got quite near to me.
I ran fast and finally disengaged myself from them. Then,
I saw something strange…the sky was turning black and white.
Why was the weather changing from rainy to sunny and back?
Why was no one else in here? Then I heard someone saying,
“I need your blood.”
I didn't know why but there was a garden, which suddenly
appeared from behind. The roses in the garden were really
beautiful. I walked into it carefully and quietly. I heard
something that frightened me, “Look! There is a person in
our place.” “Yes! I'm so hungry, there haven't been any people
in here for such a long time, let's play with her, I'm so
hungry, ha-ha!” The flowers were speaking. “Oh, no! Can they
eat me?” I thought and was very worried about it.
After a while, the roses became pitcher plants and wanted
to eat me, I was scared and ran away as fast as I could, but
the flowers grew quickly, they even grew bigger than me for
a moment, “Oh, no! I'm trapped in the garden!” All the roses
opened their mouths, “Oh, no! Help! Help! Help!”
The old clock struck five times. It was five o'clock in
the afternoon. I had a nightmare. I sat on the sofa in front
of the television in the living room. The TV screen showed
blood and skeletons, and there were words flashing: Your life
is over!
Comments:
Very Imaginative! This story brings
the reader along through a crazy nightmare. The
ending is interesting and creative. Excellent
use of detail and description! Thank you for sharing
this with us. Well Done! |
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